Always my love.

“Are you sure you both want to leave at 12.30 in the night”, Trisha’s friend asked her anxiously. 

“Yeah, I have nothing to fear when he is with me”, Trisha replied with a twinkle in her eye. 

Her friend lowered her voice, “Uhhh.., you know each other for just a year now, are you sure he won’t take you somewhere else, its pretty dark you know, and you never can tell with guys like him..”. 

“Well, he is the only one I can trust with my life, and even if he takes me somewhere else I would follow in a hearbeat, he will never put me in any danger you know, after all he is my forever love…”, said Trisha wiping a tear at the corner of eye. 

Her friend decided to say no more and silently waved them goodbye, watching Trisha follow her guide-dog in the night time.

 

That’s my post for Five Sentence Fictions word: SECURE! Let me know if you like it! 🙂

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24 Comments

  1. Cute is what I think when I read this post. Yes, when you are in love, trust is the first thing that comes naturally.

    • padhs2k
      August 1
      Reply

      Very true. Love between any two beings, is always based on trust 🙂

  2. August 1
    Reply

    Cannot imagined it to be end in this way. Awesome 🙂

    • padhs2k
      August 1
      Reply

      Thanks Alok 🙂

  3. August 1
    Reply

    beautiful .. i am impressed by the narration

    • padhs2k
      August 1
      Reply

      Thank you 🙂 And welcome to my blog!

    • padhs2k
      August 1
      Reply

      Thanks, glad you liked it!

  4. August 1
    Reply

    I like your story, it’s a nice story about trust.

    • padhs2k
      August 1
      Reply

      Thanks!

  5. Anita
    August 1
    Reply

    Surprise ending 🙂
    Nicely narrated. We can trust the guide-dogs…

    • padhs2k
      August 1
      Reply

      Thanks! I love guide-dogs, have seen them in so many places and always wondered how patient and loyal they are. Wonderful beings 🙂

  6. Anonymous
    August 1
    Reply

    Very nice padma!! 🙂

    • padhs2k
      August 1
      Reply

      Thank you, whoever you are! 😀 (wish you could have put in your name though..:) )

    • padhs2k
      August 1
      Reply

      Thanks maams 😀

    • padhs2k
      August 4
      Reply

      Haha like minds huh! Always loving and expecting only love in return, that’s a dog for you 🙂

  7. The secure love between a woman and her dog. How beautiful! Lovely take on the prompt. Nice twist at the end 🙂

    • padhs2k
      August 5
      Reply

      Thank you! And welcome to my blog!

  8. August 7
    Reply

    Nice narration and nice little twist. Loved it!!

    • padhs2k
      August 15
      Reply

      Thanks Vinitha 🙂

  9. August 13
    Reply

    Lovely! The balance between security and love is so important!

    • padhs2k
      August 15
      Reply

      Thank you 🙂

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